“Maybe you could add onomatopoeia here? To describe what it sounded like when we crashed?” I suggested to a student about his slice as another boy sat next to him typing.
He looked at me quizzically, so I gave him a few examples, “Boom! Crash!”
“Sound of my heart…” sings the boy next to us. I couldn’t help but start cracking up! Perfect timing.
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Reminds me of the Lennon and Maisy cover of that song. Cute.
Sweet!
I thought the same thing as your one student as soon as I read your title. Cute slice.